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26th Jul 2011, 4:31 AM


Comic Review: Ghost House

Ghost House
A comic about a new ghost... some dude who just figured out he's dead.  And now he is out to do some detective work about his own death.  

Art - 3/5
- art needs some refinement but otherwise decent.  
- coloring is ok.  
- perspective a little off in some areas (panel 1 house)
- could use a ruler for straight lines... for instance: (picture frames)
- proportions a little off for instance: (Watson's hands too short)

Story - 3.5/5
- Story looks interesting and decent enough.  But its not something that will get me hooked on it.    
- My only comment is that there seems to be too many characters.
Is this gonna be an epic story in where all of these characters will get developed?  Who knows?  

Delivery - 4/5
- panel flow very easy to understand
- need to use dynamic camera angles.  Too many "talking head" scenes

Overall Impression - 3.5 / 5
- Not bad.  Just improve here and there (read any "how to draw" book or take up some art courses or just go practice practice and more practice) and all will be fine.  :)
- Writing skill seems to be ok.