Prologue 1

posted 17th Jul 2011, 11:01 PM

Prologue 1
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9th Aug 2012, 10:28 AM

JD

If you redo these first few pages. You need to change it from saying, "Iraq and Afghanistan" at all points, and change it to either one or the other. You can also say.. Middle East. But all my personal viewpoints aside, your lack of knowledge of this area of the world is showing through by lumping two countries in two geographically seperate areas into one sentence whereby you are making it seem as though the character is in both places. I've been in the Middle East for almost a decade now, so I don't agree with how you are portraying American soldiers.. BUT.. to be taken seriously, read up on it a bit more and try to correct future mistakes like that one. You can't have an opinion taken seriously if don't get your facts straight.

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1st Mar 2013, 2:21 AM

Guest

I agree with you here. It's hard to take this seriously when so little seems based in reality.

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